In writing class, we saw a video called "What adults can learn from kids". Adora Svitak who seemed like our age had progressed. I was impressed that 13 or 14 year old girl could presentate it so well. She strongly argued that adults have something to learn from kids too. There are many things that we should learn from adults, but I believe that adults have something to learn from kids too. I can think about two basic theories.
First theory that I thought was relationship. Yes, adults does make relationship great, but I think it's more easier for childrens. For example, we came to a camp but doesn't now anybody. Then, making friends is important. To do this, people should talk or play each other. In this point, I think childrens has a bit more advantage.
My second theory is same as Adora. I think childrens have a lot of possibilities. We live in new generation and can experience a lot of things. When we experience a lot of thins, we can be brave in every situations. As a result, I believe that adults should learn kid's experience. And I think these two theories are what adults should learn from kids.
Thank you
Your short essay is fairly good structure, but there is no concluding paragraph. Still, your ideas are clearly presents and with some explanation.
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